Tragedy in the Grand Tetons is a warning to stay on firm footing {Gadling}

Sep 24th 2009 2:53PM Jamie your piece is terrible. You make it sound like the dead man was rescued.
"thankfully, the rescue of both men took less than three hours."
It sounds like the victim was okay...I had to read the piece three times to understand
what you meant is one man was rescued, the other body recovered.
Then to end the piece relating it to your husband's friend...who cares?
The man who is gone has a family who is grieving. A little respect, please. I'm sure
you could have chosen a better term than "tumbled." You make it sound almost fun.