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Travel writing: how not to do it
We've had some interesting posts on travel writing lately, including Don George's secret formula for writing a successful travel narrative and Pam Mandel's report on Book Passage. While studying good writing is vital to learning how to write, it's also important to study bad writing so you know what not to do.
Talented writer Steve Almond tackles this for us with his hilarious skewering of Toto's 1982 pop hit Africa. I never liked this song, although it was the background theme to far too many high school memories. While this is a song and not a travel article, it includes many of the mistakes sloppy writers make when covering travel in general and Africa in particular. Watch, laugh, and learn.
Thanks to my friend Hannah for showing me this vid!
Filed under: Arts and Culture, Africa












Reader Comments (Page 1 of 1)
Chris L. Robinson Sep 1st 2011 7:07PM
Meh. What's the purpose of this? Not sure many songs could withstand a skewering in front of an audience primed to dismiss it as trite. Seems the lesson here is to not write travel articles like songs. Or to not create anything lest someone use it to clown you in the future.
I mean, could Lady Marmalade or Imagine or even The Star Spangled Banner withstand this kind of scrutiny? "And the rockets’ red glare," [pause for laughter] "the bombs bursting in air," [wait for guffaws] "Gave proof through the night that our flag was still there". [await standing ovation].
Dunno. In a bad mood.
Probably shouldn't even post this. [posts it]
Kat Sep 2nd 2011 10:54AM
Love the shirt.
Ryan Wallace Sep 2nd 2011 2:06PM
You weren't a fan of this song?! That's insane. An absolute classic if ever I heard one. Funny take on it, thanks for the heads up.
Ryan
www.seecolombia.travel/blog
pam Sep 3rd 2011 2:18AM
I love(d) this song. Of course I did. And I found this excruciating and hilarious.